It's finally over, let's learn from others to finish the comments.
This is not Lao Fei’s first book, but it is definitely Lao Fei’s most attentive book. Overall, Lao Fei is quite satisfied with it, and of course there are many shortcomings. The first is that there are too many female protagonists, and the second is that the description of the meat scene is a bit single, which is all flaws. In the next book, Lao Fei will work hard to correct it!
In addition, there are many female characters that appeared in the early stage that did not write in detail, and they mentioned the last chapter, and they didn't even mention the name. This is Lao Fei's mistake. It's the same sentence. There are too many female characters, so it's impossible for each to take care of. Moreover, when the plot has been completed, it's still endless sex. It's really meaningless, so it ends like this.
Finally, thank you brothers for your company, so that Lao Fei knows that his efforts have not been in vain and that someone still supports it. This is the greatest affirmation of an author, thank you!!!
This is not Lao Fei’s first book, but it is definitely Lao Fei’s most attentive book. Overall, Lao Fei is quite satisfied with it, and of course there are many shortcomings. The first is that there are too many female protagonists, and the second is that the description of the meat scene is a bit single, which is all flaws. In the next book, Lao Fei will work hard to correct it!
In addition, there are many female characters that appeared in the early stage that did not write in detail, and they mentioned the last chapter, and they didn't even mention the name. This is Lao Fei's mistake. It's the same sentence. There are too many female characters, so it's impossible for each to take care of. Moreover, when the plot has been completed, it's still endless sex. It's really meaningless, so it ends like this.
Finally, thank you brothers for your company, so that Lao Fei knows that his efforts have not been in vain and that someone still supports it. This is the greatest affirmation of an author, thank you!!!