Write down the full text. It’s time to write three words, and I feel a little disappointed in my heart.
This major change that lurks is now completed
Speaking of which, this major revision began about two years ago
All the wolf friends know that lurking was started many years ago by Big Gray Brother, and wrote that Hua Jianxiong was put down when he went on a business trip in Changchun.
It was around 2007. When my brother saw this article in the jar, he had been put on hold for a long time. After reading it, he felt that it was a pity to give up halfway. On a whim, he continued it.
At that time, Yu Zecheng's version of the TV series was lurking, probably still in the womb, or it was still liquid.
Here, let’s share the contents of Wolf friends who mistakenly think this article is a H-text version of the TV series.
After the continuation, it was revised twice, forming the current pattern of three parts: upper, middle and lower
Generally speaking, the beginning of the upper and middle parts is the writing style of Big Gray Brother, and the subsequent one is the brother's continuation.
During the process of continuation and revision, some of the brothers written by Big Gray Brother were not moved intact, and even typos had not been moved.
It was about the time of the year before yesterday that my brother occasionally read the full text. Somehow, he suddenly felt that the part he continued to write was very different from the first half of Big Gray Brother in terms of narrative style, language habits, and even the way of interpreting the story. The difference between the whole text was very obvious, and the more he read it, the more uncomfortable he became.
So it was a whim again, and I wanted to try whether the style of the whole text can be unified and make it an organic whole
The brother thought he had no ability to change the whole text into the style of Big Gray Brother, so he had to settle for the second best and modify the previous part according to his own style.
This is the origin of this revision
It was indeed a whim
But after changing two chapters, I found that the project volume was much larger than I thought, even more than writing a new one.
However, my brother was very interested at the time, so he replanned the context of the whole story, even pulled out the outline, and rewritten it excitedly
When I was about halfway through the upper part, I suddenly felt that I couldn't continue to change. I felt like I was unable to do anything and couldn't do it.
Or as the saying goes, it's a piece of
After several attempts, I was getting more and more excited, so I had to let go, leaving behind a mess of changes.
This has been released for nearly a year
At the end of last year, I saw the mess again, and suddenly I got courage again, so I picked it up again and continued
So there is the 20th edition that will be posted at the end of the year
As mentioned earlier, the original intention of this revision is to unify the style of the whole text, with the focus on the upper part. At the beginning, there was no consideration to make larger changes to the subsequent parts (that is, the middle and lower parts) that I continued to write (that is, the middle and the lower parts) at the beginning.
But during the revision process, my brother found that the original middle part was too thin
Perhaps because when I just took over the procedures, my ideas have not been fully expanded, and the plot settings are relatively thin.
Until the lower part, all kinds of complicated plots gradually unfold
The previous modifications were mainly the following parts, and the middle part seemed to be just a transition
In terms of space, the middle part was only about half of the upper part before the revision, and only one-third of the upper part after the revision
It's too thin, it doesn't match the revised two first and last parts
What's more, Zhou Xueping's plot is mainly developed in the middle
Among the four beauties of Zhou Xiao Liulin, the lurking heroine, Zhou is the brother's favorite, no one
Therefore, after the revision of the upper part was basically completed, the brother decided to rewrite the middle part, greatly enriching the content of the middle part.
But to be honest, although the content about Zhou Xueping in the middle has been greatly enriched after the revision, and the entire middle part has more than doubled in length, the brothers are actually not satisfied.
Mainly, although the content is fulfilled, the plot clues are still too monotonous, with only two lines of torture by Zhou Xueping and Yan Yu
Compared with the two plots of the Japanese, puppet and the Kuomintang and the Communist Party, which are complicated and dangerous, it is really unreasonable.
I remember that after the revision of the Central Committee posted the first few chapters, my brother almost regretted it and almost decided to stop updating and push all the Central Committee back.
However, after careful consideration, I found that even if it is pushed down, how to reconstruct the complex relationship between intrigues between all parties and perfectly connect with the newly revised upper part, there is really no mature idea.
So, I had to pinch my nose and follow the original idea to modify it
This forms the current pattern: the central part is still a clear weak link in the 20th edition, and it seems to be a low valley between the two peaks.
This is the biggest regret of the brothers' revision
As for the lower part, the original revision, the goal of the lower part was very simple and clear, which was to make a clear description of the whereabouts of Xiao and Liu.
This is because after the last revision, many wolf friends complained that the ending was too hasty. Xiao and Liu and the fate of the two ended without a clear explanation.
Even until this time I posted it, in the middle of the city, some wolf friends mentioned the lurking eunuch.
This has always been a heart disease in my heart
Friends who have read my H-essay know that no matter how long I write, I have to finish it, at least I have to finish it.
I hate eunuchs' writing the most in my life. As long as I start writing, I will never give up halfway
Speaking of this, some wolf friends may ask, what's wrong with the wealthy family?
This little brother Rong has a special explanation later.
Due to this reason, and since the lower part is the focus of the brothers' past revisions, I think it is quite complete, so I did not have a plan to make up for Xiao Liu's whereabouts after he escaped from danger. That is, the parts of Chapters 196-200 and Chapter 214-220 of the version posted now are an explanation for the complaining wolf friends, and it can also be regarded as eliminating the suspicion of eunuchs.
These two parts were also prepared at the earliest, but they were basically ready before the middle part was pasted
This is the first part of the lower part to change the typo and post it
But my brothers have always been cheap. Before reposting, they reprinted the entire text of the lower part, but they had a lot of ideas. So they were out of control and they were revised and posted. In the end, the overall length increased by nearly double. The part originally planned to increase seemed insignificant.
However, as I changed the lower part and sent it, I gradually felt new worries and premonitions.
After posting this way, you may be complained that the ending is too hasty and the story has not been finished.
But I really have no choice but to do anything, because I already understand the reason, and I also know that it is almost impossible to make the wolf friends stop complaining like this.
The reason is very simple. The background setting of this article determines that it is almost impossible to write all the clues to the end.
Brother HAPPY actually pointed out the secret in the previous comments
Here, you might as well compare the other two H-texts, art troupes and snowy areas, which are about the same magnitude as me.
The Art Troupe describes a group of vicious and desperate bandits, while the male pig in the snow is a rebel who is deeply bitter and terrified, and they can only vent their anger and kill.
The heroines who fell into their hands had no other way out except to be abused and withered
So almost all the heroines in these two articles died after being abused and destroyed.
Even if the body has not been destroyed in the end, such as Tao Lan in the Snowland (also my favorite in that article), she finally became a walking zombie and had no value to squeeze out.
Therefore, no one has ever complained about the eunuch in these two articles
The lurking is different. It describes the complex secret war between the Japanese, puppet and the Kuomintang and the Communist Party under the background of the War of Resistance Against Japan, and it is not a story of both jade and stone burning
The heroines appear in the article, take the four beauties of Zhou Xiao and Liulin, as they are different in fate.
Zhou Xueping died tragically, and Xiao Liu passed through various hardships and both escaped dangers, but they all went to the end and left each one. Although Lin Meiyin had many dangers in small places, she was in danger in the end and was not hurt at all.
In this case, as long as the person does not die (especially the heroine), there will definitely be a story
Just as some wolf friends said in their comments, they can write about the end of the War of Resistance Against Japan, and even after the War of Resistance Against Japan, they can also write about the civil war between the Kuomintang and the Communist Party. Even if they are 49 years later, they can still write about the cross-strait spy war.
In this way, there are 300 or even 600 chapters that cannot be finished.
So I said that it is almost impossible to complete if you don’t hear the eunuch’s complaints.
Therefore, the final standard for the finale I set for myself is that the plot is complete and the main characters will be explained clearly.
In fact, according to my original idea, Xiao Liu's ending in the original version was already very clear, that is, they all got rid of danger.
It's good to leave some room for the wolf friends to imagine
However, since the wolf friends have been asking me to make clear explanations very loudly, I will give you a clear explanation.
These are the chapters mentioned above about Xiao Liu's whereabouts
As for some wolf friends who think there are clues to the story that can be written in a capital letter, it is indeed reasonable
How did the things in Xiao Hong's body end? Did she return to Shanghai later? How did Liu Mèi deal with his enemies after he came back and how to continue interacting with Hua Jianxiong can indeed lead to a large number of stories.
There are some clues, characters and plots that were introduced when the plot was unfolded earlier.
For example, Pingru's story can be said to be well-known. I used it to build a wall. If I want, there is room for dissertation (I might as well spoil it out if I say this. In fact, the story of the entire art troupe is a simple sentence that my brother accidentally saw from the history of a certain army in a certain world)
What happened after Qin Yan and Yang Wen were sent to the dairy farm?
You can also write a big fascinating story
But these are indeed no longer the current tasks that the three lurking parts can complete.
So I have repeatedly said before that if anyone is willing to use all these materials to write extras, sequels, external stories, non-spreads, or even start a new job, I am optimistic and despairing and complaining
Finally, I say a few words about wealthy families, to be honest, I regret it now
The story has been written, and the cause and effect have been explained clearly
When I was honest, Chu Yun was so guilty that she had nothing to do if she was her young grandmother.
But my brother left a missing button with Chu Yun, but he didn't think about the subsequent plot.
Now that the wolf friends are chasing her butt and asking for a message, I really want to cry without tears, it's hard to get rid of a tiger
In a sense, the rich family has something in common with lurking, that is, they are not stories of both jade and stone burning
So the conclusion standard mentioned above applies to it.
By this standard, the current 70 chapters plot is complete. The only problem is that the ending of Chu Yun, one of the heroines, leaves a mystery (of course, the other heroine Man Feng is still alive, strictly speaking, there are still some other ones to write)
I'm sorry for this, I can't regret it
But no matter what, I must have an explanation to my friends.
But then again, the wolf friends here, whether they post or read posts, are all Yu Xing
So writing is entirely based on interest
A wolf friend said before that the plot of the story development is more exciting than reading the H-text part
Actually, I’m not the case!
To be honest, it is a great thing to arrange and interpret complex storylines in the background and details left by history.
Every time I write about various sexual abuse, punishment and other plots, it makes it difficult for my brother to write.
However, the heart-wrenching part is slightly better. This is why the plot of the dairy farm is written more often in this revision, which has caused some wolves to complain.
In short, writing H articles is the result of the prosperity
Even if you are in a state of interest, you can't stop it
For example, a few days ago, my brother had a sudden idea for some reason and changed the introduction part of the art troupe to make it a short story with 5 sections, which can almost be independently formed.
Actually, I didn't plan to send it anywhere, just to entertain myself
On the other hand, a story has come to an end. Even if there are still clues, it is really broken. There is no suitable plot to support a fascinating story. Even if you have the answer in your heart, you can't just take it.
So please ask the wolf friends to be proud and be more patient. When I have a idea, I will definitely make a break for the wealthy family.
I wonder if this can be considered an explanation that wolf friends can accept?
This major change that lurks is now completed
Speaking of which, this major revision began about two years ago
All the wolf friends know that lurking was started many years ago by Big Gray Brother, and wrote that Hua Jianxiong was put down when he went on a business trip in Changchun.
It was around 2007. When my brother saw this article in the jar, he had been put on hold for a long time. After reading it, he felt that it was a pity to give up halfway. On a whim, he continued it.
At that time, Yu Zecheng's version of the TV series was lurking, probably still in the womb, or it was still liquid.
Here, let’s share the contents of Wolf friends who mistakenly think this article is a H-text version of the TV series.
After the continuation, it was revised twice, forming the current pattern of three parts: upper, middle and lower
Generally speaking, the beginning of the upper and middle parts is the writing style of Big Gray Brother, and the subsequent one is the brother's continuation.
During the process of continuation and revision, some of the brothers written by Big Gray Brother were not moved intact, and even typos had not been moved.
It was about the time of the year before yesterday that my brother occasionally read the full text. Somehow, he suddenly felt that the part he continued to write was very different from the first half of Big Gray Brother in terms of narrative style, language habits, and even the way of interpreting the story. The difference between the whole text was very obvious, and the more he read it, the more uncomfortable he became.
So it was a whim again, and I wanted to try whether the style of the whole text can be unified and make it an organic whole
The brother thought he had no ability to change the whole text into the style of Big Gray Brother, so he had to settle for the second best and modify the previous part according to his own style.
This is the origin of this revision
It was indeed a whim
But after changing two chapters, I found that the project volume was much larger than I thought, even more than writing a new one.
However, my brother was very interested at the time, so he replanned the context of the whole story, even pulled out the outline, and rewritten it excitedly
When I was about halfway through the upper part, I suddenly felt that I couldn't continue to change. I felt like I was unable to do anything and couldn't do it.
Or as the saying goes, it's a piece of
After several attempts, I was getting more and more excited, so I had to let go, leaving behind a mess of changes.
This has been released for nearly a year
At the end of last year, I saw the mess again, and suddenly I got courage again, so I picked it up again and continued
So there is the 20th edition that will be posted at the end of the year
As mentioned earlier, the original intention of this revision is to unify the style of the whole text, with the focus on the upper part. At the beginning, there was no consideration to make larger changes to the subsequent parts (that is, the middle and lower parts) that I continued to write (that is, the middle and the lower parts) at the beginning.
But during the revision process, my brother found that the original middle part was too thin
Perhaps because when I just took over the procedures, my ideas have not been fully expanded, and the plot settings are relatively thin.
Until the lower part, all kinds of complicated plots gradually unfold
The previous modifications were mainly the following parts, and the middle part seemed to be just a transition
In terms of space, the middle part was only about half of the upper part before the revision, and only one-third of the upper part after the revision
It's too thin, it doesn't match the revised two first and last parts
What's more, Zhou Xueping's plot is mainly developed in the middle
Among the four beauties of Zhou Xiao Liulin, the lurking heroine, Zhou is the brother's favorite, no one
Therefore, after the revision of the upper part was basically completed, the brother decided to rewrite the middle part, greatly enriching the content of the middle part.
But to be honest, although the content about Zhou Xueping in the middle has been greatly enriched after the revision, and the entire middle part has more than doubled in length, the brothers are actually not satisfied.
Mainly, although the content is fulfilled, the plot clues are still too monotonous, with only two lines of torture by Zhou Xueping and Yan Yu
Compared with the two plots of the Japanese, puppet and the Kuomintang and the Communist Party, which are complicated and dangerous, it is really unreasonable.
I remember that after the revision of the Central Committee posted the first few chapters, my brother almost regretted it and almost decided to stop updating and push all the Central Committee back.
However, after careful consideration, I found that even if it is pushed down, how to reconstruct the complex relationship between intrigues between all parties and perfectly connect with the newly revised upper part, there is really no mature idea.
So, I had to pinch my nose and follow the original idea to modify it
This forms the current pattern: the central part is still a clear weak link in the 20th edition, and it seems to be a low valley between the two peaks.
This is the biggest regret of the brothers' revision
As for the lower part, the original revision, the goal of the lower part was very simple and clear, which was to make a clear description of the whereabouts of Xiao and Liu.
This is because after the last revision, many wolf friends complained that the ending was too hasty. Xiao and Liu and the fate of the two ended without a clear explanation.
Even until this time I posted it, in the middle of the city, some wolf friends mentioned the lurking eunuch.
This has always been a heart disease in my heart
Friends who have read my H-essay know that no matter how long I write, I have to finish it, at least I have to finish it.
I hate eunuchs' writing the most in my life. As long as I start writing, I will never give up halfway
Speaking of this, some wolf friends may ask, what's wrong with the wealthy family?
This little brother Rong has a special explanation later.
Due to this reason, and since the lower part is the focus of the brothers' past revisions, I think it is quite complete, so I did not have a plan to make up for Xiao Liu's whereabouts after he escaped from danger. That is, the parts of Chapters 196-200 and Chapter 214-220 of the version posted now are an explanation for the complaining wolf friends, and it can also be regarded as eliminating the suspicion of eunuchs.
These two parts were also prepared at the earliest, but they were basically ready before the middle part was pasted
This is the first part of the lower part to change the typo and post it
But my brothers have always been cheap. Before reposting, they reprinted the entire text of the lower part, but they had a lot of ideas. So they were out of control and they were revised and posted. In the end, the overall length increased by nearly double. The part originally planned to increase seemed insignificant.
However, as I changed the lower part and sent it, I gradually felt new worries and premonitions.
After posting this way, you may be complained that the ending is too hasty and the story has not been finished.
But I really have no choice but to do anything, because I already understand the reason, and I also know that it is almost impossible to make the wolf friends stop complaining like this.
The reason is very simple. The background setting of this article determines that it is almost impossible to write all the clues to the end.
Brother HAPPY actually pointed out the secret in the previous comments
Here, you might as well compare the other two H-texts, art troupes and snowy areas, which are about the same magnitude as me.
The Art Troupe describes a group of vicious and desperate bandits, while the male pig in the snow is a rebel who is deeply bitter and terrified, and they can only vent their anger and kill.
The heroines who fell into their hands had no other way out except to be abused and withered
So almost all the heroines in these two articles died after being abused and destroyed.
Even if the body has not been destroyed in the end, such as Tao Lan in the Snowland (also my favorite in that article), she finally became a walking zombie and had no value to squeeze out.
Therefore, no one has ever complained about the eunuch in these two articles
The lurking is different. It describes the complex secret war between the Japanese, puppet and the Kuomintang and the Communist Party under the background of the War of Resistance Against Japan, and it is not a story of both jade and stone burning
The heroines appear in the article, take the four beauties of Zhou Xiao and Liulin, as they are different in fate.
Zhou Xueping died tragically, and Xiao Liu passed through various hardships and both escaped dangers, but they all went to the end and left each one. Although Lin Meiyin had many dangers in small places, she was in danger in the end and was not hurt at all.
In this case, as long as the person does not die (especially the heroine), there will definitely be a story
Just as some wolf friends said in their comments, they can write about the end of the War of Resistance Against Japan, and even after the War of Resistance Against Japan, they can also write about the civil war between the Kuomintang and the Communist Party. Even if they are 49 years later, they can still write about the cross-strait spy war.
In this way, there are 300 or even 600 chapters that cannot be finished.
So I said that it is almost impossible to complete if you don’t hear the eunuch’s complaints.
Therefore, the final standard for the finale I set for myself is that the plot is complete and the main characters will be explained clearly.
In fact, according to my original idea, Xiao Liu's ending in the original version was already very clear, that is, they all got rid of danger.
It's good to leave some room for the wolf friends to imagine
However, since the wolf friends have been asking me to make clear explanations very loudly, I will give you a clear explanation.
These are the chapters mentioned above about Xiao Liu's whereabouts
As for some wolf friends who think there are clues to the story that can be written in a capital letter, it is indeed reasonable
How did the things in Xiao Hong's body end? Did she return to Shanghai later? How did Liu Mèi deal with his enemies after he came back and how to continue interacting with Hua Jianxiong can indeed lead to a large number of stories.
There are some clues, characters and plots that were introduced when the plot was unfolded earlier.
For example, Pingru's story can be said to be well-known. I used it to build a wall. If I want, there is room for dissertation (I might as well spoil it out if I say this. In fact, the story of the entire art troupe is a simple sentence that my brother accidentally saw from the history of a certain army in a certain world)
What happened after Qin Yan and Yang Wen were sent to the dairy farm?
You can also write a big fascinating story
But these are indeed no longer the current tasks that the three lurking parts can complete.
So I have repeatedly said before that if anyone is willing to use all these materials to write extras, sequels, external stories, non-spreads, or even start a new job, I am optimistic and despairing and complaining
Finally, I say a few words about wealthy families, to be honest, I regret it now
The story has been written, and the cause and effect have been explained clearly
When I was honest, Chu Yun was so guilty that she had nothing to do if she was her young grandmother.
But my brother left a missing button with Chu Yun, but he didn't think about the subsequent plot.
Now that the wolf friends are chasing her butt and asking for a message, I really want to cry without tears, it's hard to get rid of a tiger
In a sense, the rich family has something in common with lurking, that is, they are not stories of both jade and stone burning
So the conclusion standard mentioned above applies to it.
By this standard, the current 70 chapters plot is complete. The only problem is that the ending of Chu Yun, one of the heroines, leaves a mystery (of course, the other heroine Man Feng is still alive, strictly speaking, there are still some other ones to write)
I'm sorry for this, I can't regret it
But no matter what, I must have an explanation to my friends.
But then again, the wolf friends here, whether they post or read posts, are all Yu Xing
So writing is entirely based on interest
A wolf friend said before that the plot of the story development is more exciting than reading the H-text part
Actually, I’m not the case!
To be honest, it is a great thing to arrange and interpret complex storylines in the background and details left by history.
Every time I write about various sexual abuse, punishment and other plots, it makes it difficult for my brother to write.
However, the heart-wrenching part is slightly better. This is why the plot of the dairy farm is written more often in this revision, which has caused some wolves to complain.
In short, writing H articles is the result of the prosperity
Even if you are in a state of interest, you can't stop it
For example, a few days ago, my brother had a sudden idea for some reason and changed the introduction part of the art troupe to make it a short story with 5 sections, which can almost be independently formed.
Actually, I didn't plan to send it anywhere, just to entertain myself
On the other hand, a story has come to an end. Even if there are still clues, it is really broken. There is no suitable plot to support a fascinating story. Even if you have the answer in your heart, you can't just take it.
So please ask the wolf friends to be proud and be more patient. When I have a idea, I will definitely make a break for the wealthy family.
I wonder if this can be considered an explanation that wolf friends can accept?
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