To be honest, being caught up by a young, beautiful and cute girl is quite a proud thing for a man
Although Hasegawa refused very decisively, he could not help but feel a little proud. However, when there were too many girls who met him, Hasegawa would inevitably feel a little impatient. Each of them was a superficial girl who was greedy for his beauty.
When school was over at noon, the girls in the class who took the initiative to chat with Hasegawa were almost rejected by Hasegawa.
The rest is probably people like Miura Yumiko who were originally at the top of the class food chain, but they did not take the initiative to chat out of face or reserve. However, after seeing that Hasegawa refused all the people, Miura Yumiko and the others were a little afraid to come up. On the one hand, it was the reserve of girls, and on the other hand, they were also worried that they would feel embarrassed after being rejected by Hasegawa.
Hasegawa, I didn't expect you to refuse. There were so many girls coming to chat with him. Kato Kee appeared next to Hasegawa at some point.
Do I have to agree if they come to pick me up? They all came almost for my face, so I have no interest in them. Hasegawa shrugged: Moreover, making friends is the most important thing. I have to talk to you last semester. Almost no one paid attention to me. Now I come to pick me up again, so let's forget it. Hasegawa shook his head.
Indeed, probably because they think Hasegawa is pretty now, so they can't help but want to chat with him.
Not beautiful, but handsome Kato, you should pay attention to the word Ah
Sorry, the grades of Chinese literature are not very good, but the meaning should be similar.
It's far from it
Just as Hasegawa was chatting with Kato Hui casually, he came to Hasegawa alone: Naga, Hasegawa, OK, long time no see
Oh, Hikigaya, it's been a long time since I saw you, how are you doing during the summer vacation? Hasegawa greeted Hikigaya Hachiman with a smile, while Hikigaya Hachiman is similar to last semester, and he still looks like a dead fisheye
However, although this guy came to say hello to Hasegawa, he still felt a little awkward.
Fortunately, although I stayed at home throughout the summer vacation, and my parents even took Komachi on a family trip, it was pretty good for me. At least I wrote a book of novels during the summer vacation. Hikigaya Hachiman tilted his head, as if he didn't dare to look at Hasegawa. Anyway, his clothes were awkward.
Looking at Haseman Hikigaya like this, Haseman felt a little speechless. Last semester, although Haseman Hikigaya was also dead, at least he wouldn't be tilted like this when he was talking.
But Hasegawa didn't know that this was because of him. Hasegawa became much handsome all of a sudden compared to last semester.
Last semester, Hasegawa was at most a little handsome, and at best, it wasn't much better than Hikigaya Hachiman.
So when facing Hasegawa, Hikigaya Hachiman would not feel too inferior.
But now, Hasegawa suddenly became a handsome guy, and even transformed himself into a life winner. He was confessed by countless girls, and he would never get Hikigaya Hachiman that would never get
So at this time, Hikigaya Hachiman faced Hasegawa unconsciously lacked confidence.
If it weren't for Hikigaya Hachiman, he wouldn't want to lose a friend. At the same time, he also wanted to ask Hasegawa, the best-selling author, for advice from him, with the novel he wrote.
Of course, what Hikigaya Hachiman himself thought was that if there was no friends, there would be no more. Anyway, he would be more free if he took the initiative to find Hasegawa, but he just wanted to get Hasegawa's guidance.
After all, the guidance of a best-selling light novel writer is something that ordinary people cannot get. This is a rare opportunity. As for whether you really think so in your heart, that's another matter.
Hikitani, you said that your light novel has been written in one volume? Can you let me read it? Hasegawa was a little surprised and asked
Of course, it's okay, but this is my first time writing it after all, and I don't have much mastery and understanding of light novels, so it's not very good to write. Hikigaya Hachiman seemed relieved, and then he said without much confidence.
Don't worry, I understand that I'm here too. Let me see how you wrote it. Hasegawa said with a smile
Give it, to you Hikigaya Hachiman handed the manuscript he had prepared long ago to Hasegawa
The lonely brave man? Hasegawa glanced at the title of the light novel written by Hachiman Hikigaya and couldn't help but smile
Although it is just a title, Hasegawa has a certain understanding of the tone of this book. Perhaps, the protagonist of this book, this brave man, may be the protagonist created by Hikigaya Hachiman as the prototype.
Generally speaking, most of the first Virgos of light novel writers will put the protagonist into themselves, or put themselves into the protagonist.
The protagonist's ideas or ways of acting will be based on himself as the prototype
Moreover, this guy Hikigaya Hachiman is also quite withdrawn, so the character of the protagonist of this book should be the same, just like that.
After gently opening this novel, Hasegawa began to read it
At the same time, I have to say that Hikigaya Hachiman's writing style is quite good. Although it is not as good as Hasegawa, whose writing skills have reached level 4, it is only slightly worse than Kasunoki Shihara.
Hasegawa didn't expect that Hachiman's writing style was so excellent. However, although Hachiman's writing style was excellent, he was inevitably a little weak in the character setting and plot.
Of course, the content written by Hikigaya Hachiman is a bit interesting
Logically speaking, if it is at this level, it should have reached the requirement of publishing.
But Hasegawa is still a little unsure
Because Hasegawa discovered that there was no heroine in this light novel. No, it seems that there are no relatively excellent women. There are not many excellent female characters in a light novel. Even the supporting actresses seem to be very rare, and there is no chance to appear at all.
Even if one or two female characters occasionally appear, most of them will flash by.
How to say it, Hasegawa doesn't know how to evaluate this novel
The story is pretty good, and the plot is reasonable. Although it is a bit old-fashioned, it is just a Japanese high school student who travels to another world and becomes a brave man, carrying the fate of defeating the devil.
But, but Ah
The protagonists of Hikiya's book are all alone, and there are no outstanding women joining the team of brave men.
Look at other light novels. Let’s not talk about whether the story is good or not. At least there will definitely be some excellent heroines or supporting actresses.
Even if it is a light novel by a single heroine, there will definitely be no shortage of portrayals of the heroine. However, Hikigaya Hachiman's novels can even be said to have no heroine at all.
Hasegawa put down the manuscript in his hand and looked at Hikigaya Hachiman in a strange way
Well, that, Hasegawa, you, what do you think I wrote? Hikiya Hachiman looked at Hasegawa and felt a little nervous after reading it.
Hikiya, have you been hurt in love? Hasegawa couldn't help asking
Alas? No, no, no, no, how could I get hurt in my relationship? No Hikigaya Hachiman shook his head quickly
If not, then why, there is no heroine Ah in your novel? There is not even a better woman?
That, light novel, and I didn't tell you that there must be a heroine in the story. Moreover, female characters, I always feel that it doesn't seem useful, and women are super troublesome. I don't write female characters, that's to reduce trouble. Hikigaya Hachiman said in a sensible way
Listening to Hachiman Hachiman's words, Hasegawa actually wanted to laugh a little: Hikiya, to be honest, I have never seen a light novel you wrote like this. After all, the heroine in the light novel is definitely a big highlight, and the interaction between the heroine and the male protagonist is another big highlight. Now, there are not even the heroine in your novel, and there are much less highlights than other novels. So, I think, can you change it? Even if you only add an excellent heroine?
But, girls are really troublesome, Hikigaya Hachiman muttered
Anyway, if I were the editor, I would never pass the article you wrote, unless you can work hard to improve your writing style and write the story better and more interesting. Hasegawa shrugged and gave Hikigaya Hachiman such an answer
When it comes to the heroine, Hasegawa read some online novels in his previous life, such as some great masters with very good writing skills. No, it should be said that they are great masters with very high writing skills. The writing style may not be very good, but the content written is very passionate, especially those who tend to fantasy. The main line is to upgrade and kill monsters, so the portrayal of female characters is not very outstanding. However, even that, there will be a few female characters, even if they are just supporting roles, even if the heroine disappears after only a few episodes, there are also some, and there are no Hikigaya Hachiman here at all.
Do you still need to improve your writing skills? Sure enough, it is not that easy to write Ah in light novels, I will work hard. Hikigaya Hachiman nodded seriously
... Hasegawa
Although Hasegawa refused very decisively, he could not help but feel a little proud. However, when there were too many girls who met him, Hasegawa would inevitably feel a little impatient. Each of them was a superficial girl who was greedy for his beauty.
When school was over at noon, the girls in the class who took the initiative to chat with Hasegawa were almost rejected by Hasegawa.
The rest is probably people like Miura Yumiko who were originally at the top of the class food chain, but they did not take the initiative to chat out of face or reserve. However, after seeing that Hasegawa refused all the people, Miura Yumiko and the others were a little afraid to come up. On the one hand, it was the reserve of girls, and on the other hand, they were also worried that they would feel embarrassed after being rejected by Hasegawa.
Hasegawa, I didn't expect you to refuse. There were so many girls coming to chat with him. Kato Kee appeared next to Hasegawa at some point.
Do I have to agree if they come to pick me up? They all came almost for my face, so I have no interest in them. Hasegawa shrugged: Moreover, making friends is the most important thing. I have to talk to you last semester. Almost no one paid attention to me. Now I come to pick me up again, so let's forget it. Hasegawa shook his head.
Indeed, probably because they think Hasegawa is pretty now, so they can't help but want to chat with him.
Not beautiful, but handsome Kato, you should pay attention to the word Ah
Sorry, the grades of Chinese literature are not very good, but the meaning should be similar.
It's far from it
Just as Hasegawa was chatting with Kato Hui casually, he came to Hasegawa alone: Naga, Hasegawa, OK, long time no see
Oh, Hikigaya, it's been a long time since I saw you, how are you doing during the summer vacation? Hasegawa greeted Hikigaya Hachiman with a smile, while Hikigaya Hachiman is similar to last semester, and he still looks like a dead fisheye
However, although this guy came to say hello to Hasegawa, he still felt a little awkward.
Fortunately, although I stayed at home throughout the summer vacation, and my parents even took Komachi on a family trip, it was pretty good for me. At least I wrote a book of novels during the summer vacation. Hikigaya Hachiman tilted his head, as if he didn't dare to look at Hasegawa. Anyway, his clothes were awkward.
Looking at Haseman Hikigaya like this, Haseman felt a little speechless. Last semester, although Haseman Hikigaya was also dead, at least he wouldn't be tilted like this when he was talking.
But Hasegawa didn't know that this was because of him. Hasegawa became much handsome all of a sudden compared to last semester.
Last semester, Hasegawa was at most a little handsome, and at best, it wasn't much better than Hikigaya Hachiman.
So when facing Hasegawa, Hikigaya Hachiman would not feel too inferior.
But now, Hasegawa suddenly became a handsome guy, and even transformed himself into a life winner. He was confessed by countless girls, and he would never get Hikigaya Hachiman that would never get
So at this time, Hikigaya Hachiman faced Hasegawa unconsciously lacked confidence.
If it weren't for Hikigaya Hachiman, he wouldn't want to lose a friend. At the same time, he also wanted to ask Hasegawa, the best-selling author, for advice from him, with the novel he wrote.
Of course, what Hikigaya Hachiman himself thought was that if there was no friends, there would be no more. Anyway, he would be more free if he took the initiative to find Hasegawa, but he just wanted to get Hasegawa's guidance.
After all, the guidance of a best-selling light novel writer is something that ordinary people cannot get. This is a rare opportunity. As for whether you really think so in your heart, that's another matter.
Hikitani, you said that your light novel has been written in one volume? Can you let me read it? Hasegawa was a little surprised and asked
Of course, it's okay, but this is my first time writing it after all, and I don't have much mastery and understanding of light novels, so it's not very good to write. Hikigaya Hachiman seemed relieved, and then he said without much confidence.
Don't worry, I understand that I'm here too. Let me see how you wrote it. Hasegawa said with a smile
Give it, to you Hikigaya Hachiman handed the manuscript he had prepared long ago to Hasegawa
The lonely brave man? Hasegawa glanced at the title of the light novel written by Hachiman Hikigaya and couldn't help but smile
Although it is just a title, Hasegawa has a certain understanding of the tone of this book. Perhaps, the protagonist of this book, this brave man, may be the protagonist created by Hikigaya Hachiman as the prototype.
Generally speaking, most of the first Virgos of light novel writers will put the protagonist into themselves, or put themselves into the protagonist.
The protagonist's ideas or ways of acting will be based on himself as the prototype
Moreover, this guy Hikigaya Hachiman is also quite withdrawn, so the character of the protagonist of this book should be the same, just like that.
After gently opening this novel, Hasegawa began to read it
At the same time, I have to say that Hikigaya Hachiman's writing style is quite good. Although it is not as good as Hasegawa, whose writing skills have reached level 4, it is only slightly worse than Kasunoki Shihara.
Hasegawa didn't expect that Hachiman's writing style was so excellent. However, although Hachiman's writing style was excellent, he was inevitably a little weak in the character setting and plot.
Of course, the content written by Hikigaya Hachiman is a bit interesting
Logically speaking, if it is at this level, it should have reached the requirement of publishing.
But Hasegawa is still a little unsure
Because Hasegawa discovered that there was no heroine in this light novel. No, it seems that there are no relatively excellent women. There are not many excellent female characters in a light novel. Even the supporting actresses seem to be very rare, and there is no chance to appear at all.
Even if one or two female characters occasionally appear, most of them will flash by.
How to say it, Hasegawa doesn't know how to evaluate this novel
The story is pretty good, and the plot is reasonable. Although it is a bit old-fashioned, it is just a Japanese high school student who travels to another world and becomes a brave man, carrying the fate of defeating the devil.
But, but Ah
The protagonists of Hikiya's book are all alone, and there are no outstanding women joining the team of brave men.
Look at other light novels. Let’s not talk about whether the story is good or not. At least there will definitely be some excellent heroines or supporting actresses.
Even if it is a light novel by a single heroine, there will definitely be no shortage of portrayals of the heroine. However, Hikigaya Hachiman's novels can even be said to have no heroine at all.
Hasegawa put down the manuscript in his hand and looked at Hikigaya Hachiman in a strange way
Well, that, Hasegawa, you, what do you think I wrote? Hikiya Hachiman looked at Hasegawa and felt a little nervous after reading it.
Hikiya, have you been hurt in love? Hasegawa couldn't help asking
Alas? No, no, no, no, how could I get hurt in my relationship? No Hikigaya Hachiman shook his head quickly
If not, then why, there is no heroine Ah in your novel? There is not even a better woman?
That, light novel, and I didn't tell you that there must be a heroine in the story. Moreover, female characters, I always feel that it doesn't seem useful, and women are super troublesome. I don't write female characters, that's to reduce trouble. Hikigaya Hachiman said in a sensible way
Listening to Hachiman Hachiman's words, Hasegawa actually wanted to laugh a little: Hikiya, to be honest, I have never seen a light novel you wrote like this. After all, the heroine in the light novel is definitely a big highlight, and the interaction between the heroine and the male protagonist is another big highlight. Now, there are not even the heroine in your novel, and there are much less highlights than other novels. So, I think, can you change it? Even if you only add an excellent heroine?
But, girls are really troublesome, Hikigaya Hachiman muttered
Anyway, if I were the editor, I would never pass the article you wrote, unless you can work hard to improve your writing style and write the story better and more interesting. Hasegawa shrugged and gave Hikigaya Hachiman such an answer
When it comes to the heroine, Hasegawa read some online novels in his previous life, such as some great masters with very good writing skills. No, it should be said that they are great masters with very high writing skills. The writing style may not be very good, but the content written is very passionate, especially those who tend to fantasy. The main line is to upgrade and kill monsters, so the portrayal of female characters is not very outstanding. However, even that, there will be a few female characters, even if they are just supporting roles, even if the heroine disappears after only a few episodes, there are also some, and there are no Hikigaya Hachiman here at all.
Do you still need to improve your writing skills? Sure enough, it is not that easy to write Ah in light novels, I will work hard. Hikigaya Hachiman nodded seriously
... Hasegawa
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